David I want to say how much I enjoyed your poem, Sometimes a short poem can
say a lot and this one does. It works on two levels both in an inner and an
outer landscape and for me this is what makes a poem special. Bw Sally J
>From: David Anthony <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Autumn Traveller
>Date: Tue, 12 Nov 2002 08:41:06 +0000
>
>Autumn Traveller
>
>It’s hard to see my way because
>the leaves have fallen. Now
>they drift where once the clear path was—
>it’s hard to see my way. Because
>the light is brief, I dare not pause;
>I’ll find the track somehow.
>It’s hard to see my way because
>the leaves have fallen now.
>
>David Anthony
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