Hi Philip
First Congrats! on winning The Hammick National Poetry Day Prize in
Liverpool, I am behind in my comments(big-time)
I am studying 3D annimation{angle-itis}.... and into testing :)
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"fascinating effect!", yes you were the only one to mention that, did
you find that the placement of the comma
gave a more wanting feeling to the piece
thank you for your comments
david
Philip Burton wrote:
> Dear David,
> The comma after “I” in the last line – fascinating effect!
> Philip
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