Hooray, you can see what I'm saying!
Got it in one, point being = who is under the influence? the driver or the
passenger?
We can find influence via relationships.
Thankyou for clearing the mist/missed.Sally knows me too well!
Lynn
----- Original Message -----
From: "Bob Cooper" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Saturday, November 09, 2002 1:04 PM
Subject: Re: New Sub - Wiped Away
> Hi Lynn,
> I really like this! It's great! What I understand it to be saying is one
> person's too drunk to drive and the other (who's driving) isn't fully into
> the ways of driving (wiping the windscreen with a hand). that's what I
see -
> and the metaphor's a dazzler!
> Bob
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> >From: Lynn Owen <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: New Sub - Wiped Away
> >Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2002 19:50:16 -0000
> >
> >A short for thought.
> >Lynn
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> >Wiped Away
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> >You wanted to drink
> >I agreed to drive
> >on the way home
> >I struggled to see
> >until you wiped the windscreen
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