Hi Lynn,
I really like this! It's great! What I understand it to be saying is one
person's too drunk to drive and the other (who's driving) isn't fully into
the ways of driving (wiping the windscreen with a hand). that's what I see -
and the metaphor's a dazzler!
Bob
>From: Lynn Owen <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New Sub - Wiped Away
>Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2002 19:50:16 -0000
>
>A short for thought.
>Lynn
>
>Wiped Away
>
>You wanted to drink
>I agreed to drive
>on the way home
>I struggled to see
>until you wiped the windscreen
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