Dear Noun,
this is a wonderful poem good flow and an easy read
right up to the last line ........I have a suggestion below to have or
delete
davidc
noun wrote:
> Lost at all cost
> frost will die at thirty-two
> no remedy, no salvation
> gone
> the silver backlit spines
> shining desperately in sun
> clinging to your window
> for life
> like a choked back laugh
> wet with tears
> they suddenly disappear
> slipping silently, falling
> losing form
> like Earth back to birth.......{back to birth, the Earth}
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> noun
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