Hi Sally, I like this one I can picture it vivid images of on the pier
fishing and youth
right up to "Fishing hook caught in mid air" maybe if the hook was
'caught in the rail' (or am I missing something?)
Good read
david
Sally James wrote:
> Sands of Time
>
> She first met him by the pier
> Black fringe lolloping brown eyes
> Fishing hook caught in mid air
> Socks fallen to ankles
> Shoes scuffed by too many pebbles
>
> She sat next to him
> Dangled sunned legs next to pale ones
> Her sea eyes stared
> at his empty bucket
> dried up bait
>
> She touched curled fingers
> Red lips smiled into the sunset
> Seagulls caught their whispers
>
> She licked the salt from his cheeks
> Left him
> with the essence of their dreams
> a trail of sand to follow.
>
> Sally James
>
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