Hi Phillip,
Reads quite well to me. Well writ.
Cheers,
Frank
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
> Son of the Surf
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>Proud as a damson - Finistral Bay
>high on lawns and Michaelmas daisy
>her links and shales stiff with valerian
>and ancient youths, expectant
>as new-laid mothers.
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>Surf is not up - there are tales though
>ebbing, dreams for the tongue
>honed and waxed and sun-turned
> tsunamis of the third, maybe fourth, kind
>tunnels through foam
>tunnels through time
>tunnels home.
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>A tellerman dips his voice
>paddling the tale of the cool death
>of one who, capped by undercurrent
> and the surface unattainable,
>had scratched on his Malabu
>the fingernail epitaph
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>sonofabitch
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