Thank you sally for reading and your comments
david
Sally James wrote:
> I like the way you combine inner and outer landscapes. I like Autumn but
> some days can be bleak and the mood can fit the season. Bw Sally J
>
> >From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: Haunting within
> >Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2002 02:12:14 -0330
> >
> > Jade eyes have a mournful stare
> >drenched in the emptiness
> >of one more heartache.
> >
> >Blackened clouds torment
> >as autumn calls, dreary and afraid
> >heroine leans against stone.
> >
> >I drift into the distance
> >whispering softly of winter's chill
> >a bystander in my body.
>
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