Hi james,
Thank you.
I think it was your own comment to the effect that this kind of project
allowed one to dig up the unexpected, and I certainly find it enabling.
There are some things I generally choose not to address, or places I prefer
not to travel, but I sometimes take a sneaky visit when writing a tale that
encompasses someone else's line - a level of restraint that does not apply.
The Elliot seems positively inspirational, as you point out.
Thjanks and be well.
Frank
>Hi Frank,
>
>I rather like this stylistic development you have manifested here of a
>grander style that fits well with your realist narrative approach. I was a
>little taken aback by the form here then felt it worked. Eliot has this
>quality of allowing or giving permission to other poets a certain freedom.
>
>bw
>James
>
>
>>From: Frank Faust <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: Hyper-sub - no, not the old city
>>Date: Tue, 15 Jan 2002 12:39:55 +1100
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>>(my line = 'streets that follow like a tedious argument')
>>
>>... and the old city is a wasting of time there is nothing of value
>>there
>>no return on that investment those twenty years of purgatude
>>spent with an aspirational heart every day from the beginning
>>when to walk that way was something fresh and new each pace
>>holding its own speed and reason much like here perhaps
>>here in this newer place with this newer purpose
>>so draped with the coatings now of experience knowledge
>>perhaps it is not the purpose that has changed not so very much
>>
>>this though this is not that ancient wreckage with its labyrinth
>>byways
>>foetid distractions those twisted streets that follow like a tedious
>>argument
>>renewed upon boulevards and avenues that open yawning black
>>in sickly honeyed invitation with each tempted visitation to that
>>past no
>>this is newer ground these paths are fresh and open look up
>>that blue is the sky in this place it is mine yours ours
>>if
>>you wish it
>>you and me and the coloured blue of our own sky
>>
>>no let us not go near to the old city
>>there is nothing there for us nothing
>>
>>~
>>Frank
>>
>>
>>
>>The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
>>http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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>bw
>James
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