She can still remember the smell,
sharp and sweet like death
dissolved in raspberry juice.
Grassy, great beginning and end. A fine tribute. Gran would be pleased.
Me though, I want the middle tighter and less, either the sheep or squirrels
could go.
Smiles.
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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