Barbara, infinity and eternity.
among the infinity of dots across
The use of Latin derivatives vs A-S/Germanic is interesting. The choice
makes voice. All of the former gives a weight/heaviness to the work. All
of the latter a real feel. Most of us mix simply because that word -
regardless of derivation - seems to work.
Here?
I think you have to stay with infinity/eternity unless you go for a major
rewrite. But I would set eternity on the line before.
Smiles.
Gary
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