Thanks for the input.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 10.17.02 8:53:58 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
A bitter tasting poem. But it can't be otherwise.
I'm wondering if the phrase "so long ago when" is needed? Wouldn't the two
words Vietnam & Napalm (or a shorter phrase to link the words, perhaps just
a word... like "where" work easier (or are you worried about the sounds of
"Nam/ Napalm/man" then being too close together...)
For a non-baseball-person the title "World Series" speaks volumes too!
Bob
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