Yes, like this minimalist approach. Maybe its our mutual liking of the
Chinese that does it. Small quibble. The leap from S3 and S4 seems large to
me. I saw the link eventually but it comfused me at first.
bw
James
>From: Gary B <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New: Totem
>Date: Thu, 17 Oct 2002 07:50:58 -0700
>
>Totem
>
>a rock
>shape of testicles
>size of an Italian plum
>brown with shades of indigo and gray
>lightly chipped
>
>ordinary
>until moist with finger oil
>
>a salmon
>leaps clouded rapids
>otters wait behind to catch the spray
>
>stored with a worry stone
>found
>at a freeway rest stop
>
>philosopher's pebbles
>thrown at a stray cat
>
>Oct Michael Dean and poems for peace at:
>http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html
>
>*New* Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
>
>Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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