In a message dated 10.09.02 3:59:39 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<<
Essential Sunday slumps
under a dead hand of steam -
gently returning to dough. >>
Could you skip some adjectives/other non-essential words; I really think this
one has lots to say.
For instance?
Sunday slumps
under steam
returns to dough.
...etc.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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