Michi, thanks for the suggestions. I have several, but I want to be very
careful with changes. Some comments conflict (take or love the end couplet)
so I need to let the poem rest a bit. Thanks.
Sally, thanks.
Gary
Oct Michael Dean and poems for peace at:
http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html
*New* Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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