Michi, a very good work. I have a couple of comments but they can be safely
ignored. A vg tribute.
Thanks.
Gary
Woman with the face of a three-quarter moon,
girl with the cherry mouth, (no the
you speak of the stars, of the steppe (no of and no first the
and are wilder, gentler than they. (no and are
Every man is at your mercy;
with your words you restrain them, (no with and you
untie them again, drag their bodies
Oct Michael Dean and poems for peace at:
http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html
*New* Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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