thank you
wherever it points to is whatever it evokes for you, I suppose. I find your
analysis much more interesting than my own deconstruction
glad it did something
Terri )O(
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From: The Pennine Poetry Works [mailto:[log in to unmask]]On
Behalf Of arthur seeley
Sent: 07 October 2002 14:28
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Subject: Re: After the event
This is a strange little poem, Terri. I keep reading it finding the gentle
rhythm of it entrancing, almost bewitching, there is a surreality about this
and I know this piece is pointing elsewhere but honestly I'm missing it. I'm
sure it is just me.Regards Arthur.
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From: "alderoak" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, October 06, 2002 8:48 PM
Subject: New: After the event
> After the event
>
> A pocket appeared in the velvet of time
> and swallowed my sister
> fourth from the sun.
>
> I keep an ellipse in the sunlit dark.
> Between laughter and love
> there is nothing at all.
>
>
> Terri )O(
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