I can't quite get my mind to accept "like a cold water" becasuse the "a"
seems odd to me. And, I too, wonder if "myriad" is really needed. Less
flowery, poetic, words are around that won't stop a contemporary (British)
poetry reader in their tracks!
--Bob
But of course we must remember when it was written and the styles written
then.
Smiles.
Gary
Oct Michael Dean and poems for peace at:
http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html
*New* Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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