She'd had a miscarriage
up at the cottage, brought about perhaps
by worry and starvation.
So the woman
took the girl indoors into the kitchen,
among the pots, the cups, the marmalade,
the tea, and shoved a pan at her, and said,
Sally ee, I still want a S break at So the woman and for tea to end that
line.
Probably my imagination, but this seems to have fewer of those e end line
rhymes.
And the middle S could use a wee bit of music.
Thanks.
Gary
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