David, couple of bumps in this road:
picked up the dog and brought her home with him. (took?)
Some problems, though, are not so freely solved.
The master had been elderly, I'd say,
just like his little mongrel. Even though
we all of us have troubles, this I know:
he never would have left her in that way. (seems incomplete, as though it
needs a normally or the like which of course does not fit.
Thanks.
Gary
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