Hi Lynn,
Yes! I like this.
The title adds even more!
I'm amazed how much I love the combination of zip with innocence (I'd always
thought of zips as being cheeky, noisy, things until now...).
Great poem!
Bob
>From: Lynn Owen <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New Sub - Show Not Tell
>Date: Thu, 3 Oct 2002 20:46:16 +0100
>
>Thoughts and comments welcome.
>Lynn
>
>Show Not Tell
>
>I chose pure white
>not cream or beige
>true pure white
>
>Lace
>spun by virgin spinsters
>zipped with innocence
>
>Packed
>in a designer
>consumer friendly bag
>from
>bridesjustaddwater.com
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