and all those words like shard and myriad you're not supposed to put in
poems (another "rool")
SallyE
on 2/10/02 9:10 pm, grasshopper at [log in to unmask]
wrote:
> David,
> Heheh- I know Christina won't say it, but I will...
> Gotcha!
>
> The whole point of the poem, as I read it, is a dig at poesy-flowery verse.
> Kind regards,
> grasshopper
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Brigid Anthony" <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Wednesday, October 02, 2002 8:56 PM
> Subject: New sub: Love Is
>
>
> I was irritated by the title; and the lines that follow come across as
> overly Poetical, though with a nice flow and swing.
> I think the poem's rescued by the "whoops!" and the closing line,
> sonnet-like in its turn.
> Regards,
> David
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