Hi Christina,
There seems to be so many poems appearing at the moment! I feel I’ve got so 
many messages to try and read through. But this is where I want to start 
wriiting!
I really, really like it! It starts so well, and then keeps going just as 
well, and (at times, in quite a few places) it even gets better! It seems 
every phrase has been honed, neatly fitted into place so the rhythm, the 
sounds, work so well with the words and their meanings. The repetition (and 
the playful use of repetition in the form) is so well controlled, too! I’m 
so envious of its playfulness. What can compare to this poem? Not very much. 
It sort of stands up by itself.
Could you say more about the title, tho. I know it fits (and the two words 
are also well hidden in the poem). Part of me sometimes sort of wonders if a 
louder sounding title might also fit the poem...
Anyway, back to pressing the mouse's bum!
Bob












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