I enjoyed the read on this. The hopping about with the poem seemed to go
well and fit the persona of the frogeven if I wasn't quite clear what the
poem was going on about.
bw
James
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>Subject: 3rd. Person
>Date: Tue, 1 Oct 2002 01:06:23 +0100
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>The world exploded today
>I am a frog
>I jumped when I heard the noise
>I am still green
>I am the third person
>I am a frog
>Like the frog in your throat
>when the world exploded today
>I don't believe anymore
>that I shall become a prince
>when the princess kisses me
>but I do believe, while I regain my balance,
>someone just blew up my pond
>and I am a frog
>third person
>and you are in the present
>so sorry I couldn't be there
>I leaped away before it happened
>that is the joy of being a frog
>third person
>I am
>
>Who is that guy?
>
>noun
bw
James
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