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Re: Eye Art
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Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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Sun, 29 Sep 2002 22:38:31 EDT
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I like the poem, lots of good energy and detailed writing; I would look into the use of gerunds and repetition of phrases and ask is it necessary. kol tuv, Ryfkah
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