In a message dated 09.29.02 4:32:18 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
Shalom Frank

I thought about the husband/wife reference - I wanted the speaker/woman to
feel he was still her husband while he had remarried.

I'll consider dinners; I thought it had the feeling of repetition without the
plural but maybe not.

kol tuv, Ryfkah

PS.  Thanks.

<< Hi ryfkah,

A couple of small points. I wondered if the following line shoul dbe in
plural: 'She prepares a dinner'.

Also, I was a little confused by '>Her husband and his wife'. Maybe a little
more clarity about which she is her and which is another woman.

Cheers,

Frank
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