Hi there Terrie,
Thank you very much! The truth is that I don't drink and I'm not exactly
in any physical shape to be seen in the nude...come to think of it, I
don't even have a veranda! lol I do however, really struggle with a poem
like this and I am glad you like it.
Cheerwell, Mary :O)
--- tlrelf <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I love it! One of the high points is how you show a poet's process. I
> love
> the images, too.
> Terrie
> P.S. Somehow I fancied it was breakfast, despite the rum, or perhaps
> because of the rum and the proverbial bite of the dog that bit you!
>
> > Hi there Folks,
> >
> > Have some fun with this one...I've no explanation for the thing:
> >
> > ~*~
> >
> > Lunch In The Nude
> >
> >
> > In the time it's taken to open
> > my eyes, a dozen first-lines
> > have come and gone. I'm spent -
> > we're spent, you're snoring,
> > from mid-night
> > stoking, stroking and poking
> > which is another unfit intro-line
> > demoted to center page
> > only slightly above;
> >
> > as the sun beats down upon my face
> > because in fact, there is no sun today.
> > I believe that line is an after-affect
> > from the influence of Led Zeppelin's
> > Kashmir rhythm. It is overcast.
> >
> > I sit in dry-skin nudeness
> > on a warm veranda with orange slices,
> > almond granola, and sweetened tea
> > scrappling with first lines
> > that aren't fit
> > to open my eyes,
> > said the Poet
> >
> > reaching for the rum,
> > which is a far better line
> > to begin with
> > and definitely improves
> > the tea - let's see:
> >
> > Reaching for the rum
> > I sit in dry-skin nudeness
> > as the sun beats down upon my face.
> > In the time it's taken to open
> > my eyes, a dozen first-lines
> > have come and gone,
> > and I'm spent,
> > said the Poet.
> >
> > There is no sun today
> > but there's a first line
> > and that's a damn fine title too.
> >
> > ~*~
> >
> > Cheerwell, Mary :O)
> >
> >
> >
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> > Maryann Hazen-Stearns
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