Welcome back Sally. Sadly there seems to be a lot of this kind of poem
around which seems to suggest there's a lot of it going on. It's fine as far
as it goes. I felt there was perhaps more to come. Maybe something for
further development of the theme. Because a theme is common it doesn't mean
you can't still produce a substantial poem.
My meanerings are now complete.
bw
James
>From: Christina Fletcher <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Sub from Sally James
>Date: Fri, 27 Sep 2002 17:28:17 EDT
>
>Hi everyone, Here is a new sub from me. Back on the list after a long
>absence, thanks to Dr Puss's advice and Christina's encouragement two
>glasses of champagne and a bowl octopus stew here is a new poem,
>
>Door mat
>
>You trampled all over me
>peeled me off your jackboot
>flicked me back to the ground
>stamped on my underlay
>with your wild stilettos
>then fell with a crash
>when someone pulled the rug
>from underneath your feet.
>
>Sally James
>
bw
James
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