What is this? can it be.? no,no, not another one.....
Eye rhyme
Grassy, yes, yes, another, and after that even another. Only nit: I would
keep in two stanzas, maybe one.
Thanks.
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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