Line breaks are fine by me Barbara. They echo the way your thoughts are
going and help recreate the way you are feeling.
bw
James
>From: Barbara Ostrander <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: sub: The Waiting Game
>Date: Sat, 21 Sep 2002 16:49:41 EDT
>
>I'm a bit concerned about the line breaks. Would like to hear what you
>think. All crits welcome.
>
>Barbara Ostrander
>
>
>The Waiting Game
>
>live
>one day at a time
>stop
>smell the roses
>I'm trying
>what else can I do
>can't plan ahead
>when I don't know what's
>ahead
>don't have any answers
>hell
>I don't even know the questions
>yet
>
>
>BBO
>9/20/02
>
bw
James
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