liked the original and like even more the revision, and I love the tension
between 'unheard' and 'muffled'
Ann
Thanks kindly.
Gary
Sept Suzanne and new Centrum at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html
*New* Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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