Coo, thanks for all the fast comments on this.
Roger,-there may well be typos,but I can't see 'em-apart from catfoogd in my
subject-line. Point 'em out,please.
Marilyn, the form of the sonnet often dictates what's where, so I couldn't
really start with the sestet, as I felt the 'turn' of the sonnet was the
sense of loss after the prosaic details of the octave.
Trust me, I'm a sonnet nut, LOL.
Kind regards,
grasshopper
Subject: Re: New sub: Five cans of catfoogd
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