Sally,
I like the form and the mood it sets, but I would look at that
herbage,verbiage line, because I feel it's too jingly to be appropriate.
Kind reagrds,
grasshopper
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From: "Sally Evans" <[log in to unmask]
Sent: Sunday, August 25, 2002 6:35 PM
Subject: New: A Memory, for J........
> A memory, for J.........
>
> The garden of the Villa d'Este
> is where I was alone the best.
>
> Greenness by stone steps in the sun,
> parades of gremlins in the rain,
>
> and crowwds of statues, dark leaves, stone,
> water, outward and upwards thrown,
>
> combined to set a garden-star
> that stayed with me till Callander,
>
> where, wet with torrents from the Craigs (pr.crags)
> herbage ex[ande while verbiage lags,
>
> and sgowered petals link their songs
> with choreography of stones.
>
>
> Sally Evans
>
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