Grassy, I'm at the grandbabe's on a modum so slow I can walk to the store,
have lunch and back before a page changes.
But I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed Grapes. I have a small
suggestion, so small it may not mean anything
tomorrow he will offer a pair
of pure white doves to Jupiter
and ask to be posted back to Italy
Would the lad say Italia or Roma? Perhaps even Gaul or Sapin depending on
his background.
Simply, a great poem, but a wee bit better if accurate (which it may be and
me in the wrong).
Thanks.
Gary
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The Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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