Thanks Ryfkah.
I've just had a crack at revising the piece and decided it just doesn't work
in any kind of positive way for me anymore, so it's going to bite the dust.
A good idea at the time (or perhaps not LOL).
Oh well...
Cheers and thannks again,
frank
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>Great line below; I like the rhythm of this poem.
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>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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>In a message dated 8/7/02 10:15:15 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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><< of baubles of babble you'll see on any dog-ear used >>
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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