Arthur, I was stunned by this poem because as you know I lost a 19 year old
daughter in a car accident. I didn't know what the title meant, and I did
not see the necessity of the DOA, as I had already arrived at that
conclusion. Suggestion: Drop the DOA, and for a title "Last Spring" or
something like that. This is a very powerful and touching poem. You are
amazing. Sue
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