One bitter cynic (ok, it was me) commented that by adopting a three line
layout, the venerable fathers of the English language haiku (Zen tourists
like Blyth and Henderson) had succeeded in throwing away the burger and
eating the napkin.
Fortunately making enemies doesn't bother me.
--John
John, look how long it has taken to overcome Pound. A good point and
perhaps there should be no line break, only on sentence like Ginsberg's
pastel or American sentence.
Gary
July Stazja and new Gary at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html
*New* Wild/Eliot Hyperpoem at: http://wildhyper.homestead.com/front.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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