I guess I thought everyone could read my mind! I was responding to
Arthur's letter to Frank, which follows: (Sorry about that!)
Frank, I was a little disappointed by your reply to my request for criteria
you use when eschewing the use of punctuation. I suppose not knowing how to
punctuate is as good a reason as any and perhaps the best. I imagine, also,
it was offered a little with your tongue in your cheek.
You refer also to grammar, the rules of which we all, perhaps, wittingly or
unwittingly, breach at some time, as much out of ignorance, I imagine, as
intent.
If we allow our lack of education in these things to go unimproved then we
are in danger of two things.
First, language will degenerate to ‘mobilese’ ( R U redi 4 this? ) because
spelling punctuation and grammar make text messages too long. This is
‘doubleplusungood’, IMO. The chat rooms and mobiles do us all a disservice
in this respect. As does ‘Gotcha’ headlines and ‘Drinka pinta milka day’ or
‘Beanz means Heinz’ advertising.
I do recognise that my use of ‘degenerate’ is a value judgement on my part
and may not be seen as a valid comment by others.
The second point, and perhaps the most important, although the first
terrifies me frankly, is that communication will suffer.
Poetry can be written for ourselves, an indulgent and onanistic pastime, or
to share with others i.e. communicate, either read quietly or listened to.
Grammar, punctuation and, to a lesser degree, perhaps, spelling are
conventions developed over hundreds of years to allow accurate communication
to take place.
Language, in particular the English language, is organic. Those conventions
can and do change but they change slowly. They do to a great extent reflect
their time and it is right and proper that they do so. As poets we should and
do reflect those changes and their times, it is perhaps part of our task to
foster, promulgate and even initiate those changes but it is also our
responsibility to do it thoughtfully and with intent and purpose.
John's Rengas( or whatever they are called ) lose punctuation with intention
although they carry natural pausing.
If I eschew punctuation, and I do occasionally, I do so with purpose. I do it
to render the ‘voice’ slightly garbled and incoherent, reflecting a state of
mind, or to provide a smooth stream of conscious linking one word with the
next, overriding grammatical convention and punctuation to obtain hopefully
an added dimension to the poem but this always requires close attention to
the retention of sense and communication.
This does not suggest that your poems lack communication at all but since
this is one of my criteria for losing punctuation you can see how it might
colour my reading of a poem that eschews punctuation.
You may call me the pedantic old bugger I undoubtedly am but I would welcome
your response in the interests of improving our poetry, as I would anyone
else willing to get involved. Regards Arthur.
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