a good start and a powerful end, Arthur. though I like the squealing mauling
boys, I wonder if they are a bit noisy for the middle?

P-P


>From: Arthur <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New sub: So many Harrys.
>Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2002 17:58:34 -0000
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>They reorganised education in the city
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>and closed the old school.
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>Windows shuttered with blind boards.
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>Squeals stilled, mauling boys dismissed.
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>Wind bowls hoops of leaves down empty playground;
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>chases beer cans into corners.
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>Pale and hunched someone pukes a childhood he detests
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>against the mossed and grimy wall.
>




Perpetua Pullman


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