Hi James,
A demanding project! But, if y've got the time, go for it! It'll be
interesting to see what turns up (for you) and, for us, what you post for us
to see!
I like what's below. The 3rd person narrator is good! The tone seems open.
Makes me want to read more.
Bob
>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New sub: Instances 1
>Date: Sat, 27 Jul 2002 11:59:12 +0000
>
>This is the start of a longish project of 100 poems of 100 words written
>over 100 days. Don't ask why, it just seemed like a good idea at the time.
>I may post others to see what you think.
>
>Instance 1
>
>He decided that walking time
>was part of the moment
>part of the journey
>and not just what happened
>between start and finish
>of an individual journey
>for a lot could still be seen
>and learnt on the move
>that could easily take thoughts
>beyond the mundane - in today's
>journey many things were seen
>as seen many times before
>each benign in their presence
>assigned their place in the daily
>pathway, the tarmac, cobbles
>and concrete that daily met
>his tred. Unspoken too though
>familiar faces seen all moving
>through the same or similar
>time slot. He counted it all.
>
>
>bw
>James
>
>
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