Interesting, James _ i think I'll need to see more before i can commetn,
though. Uou're obviously setting a scene.
SallyE
on 27/7/02 12:59 pm, James Bell at [log in to unmask] wrote:
> This is the start of a longish project of 100 poems of 100 words written
> over 100 days. Don't ask why, it just seemed like a good idea at the time. I
> may post others to see what you think.
>
> Instance 1
>
> He decided that walking time
> was part of the moment
> part of the journey
> and not just what happened
> between start and finish
> of an individual journey
> for a lot could still be seen
> and learnt on the move
> that could easily take thoughts
> beyond the mundane - in today's
> journey many things were seen
> as seen many times before
> each benign in their presence
> assigned their place in the daily
> pathway, the tarmac, cobbles
> and concrete that daily met
> his tred. Unspoken too though
> familiar faces seen all moving
> through the same or similar
> time slot. He counted it all.
>
>
> bw
> James
>
>
> _________________________________________________________________
> Join the world’s largest e-mail service with MSN Hotmail.
> http://www.hotmail.com
|