When shadows go to ground
At evening when shadows go to ground
taking the gardener with them till wet dawn,
and well-grown flower-plants come into their own,
birds of evening appear on dusk's own wings,
swallows, an owl, and rooks that nest
Sally, love the title, I may steal it.
Others have given good comment. Me, want more end rhyme, maybe even a
pattern.
Thanks.
Gary
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