Most likely. Glad you liked the poem's theme.
bw
James
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: Barges
>Date: Wed, 24 Jul 2002 19:28:19 EDT
>
>I like this poem and its theme essentially but wonder if you could get rid
>of
>excess words and have a tighter even better poem.
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
bw
James
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