Hi Ryfkah,
I never thought that this could be about poetry before now. H'm,
interesting...
Thanks for the insight...
Bob
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: The Enlightening
>Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2002 22:00:35 EDT
>
>In a message dated 7/12/02 6:28:28 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
><< where my shoes, rocking on the imprints,
>scuff as all that moves, all that’s rarely said
>flows beneath all that’s between us
>- *these things perhaps are the poem.* >>
>
>I like this end stanza; usually don't like poems about poetry - feel this
>one
>works - perhaps because of the metaphor you create.
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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