Lovely writing...like the fresh approach to your subject matter...might want
to watch the gerunds in the beginning.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 7/11/02 1:09:29 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< next knotty, awkward, makes the plane blade
slip, judder. All this to see her come to life;
we are a collective Leontes and she, always she,
our Hermione, close to a first kiss of paint. >>
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