Yes you're right on this. Sally felt it was unfinished so I agree with both
of you. With Exit? Could do.
bw
James
>From: Christina Fletcher <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: From A to Z
>Date: Wed, 10 Jul 2002 13:44:40 EDT
>
>I'm sure you have a winner here, James but it needs quite a bit of sorting
>out. I was desperate to add another line at the end: 'or not' (Hamlet,
>ducks! You could send it to editors with 'Exit Pursued by a Bear').
>bw
>christina
>
>
> > From A To Z
> >
> > Like most boys
> > bbby the age of eight
> > he could tell
> > and aligator from a cat
> > a dog from an elephant
> > a giraffe from a kangaroo
> > a leopard and a lion from a tiger
> > a rhinoceros from a zebra
> >
> > having done his alphabet that way
> >
> > He knew too some of the ways
> > that girls were different
> > had learnt other things
> >
> > Already he had learnt
> > that when you kiss a girl
> > the world looks different
> > and can be better than
> > playing football all day
> > though life can get serious
> > and given the chance
> > can go from Z to B
>
>
bw
James
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