Message:
[
First
|
Previous
Next
Last
]
By Topic:
By Author:
Font:
Proportional Font
LISTSERV Archives
THE-WORKS Home
THE-WORKS 2002
Subscribe or Unsubscribe
Log In
Get Password
Subject:
New sub: Funeral Rites ( a la David Anthony)
From:
Brigid Anthony <[log in to unmask]>
Reply-To:
The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
Date:
Tue, 9 Jul 2002 17:30:52 -0400
Content-Type:
text/plain
Parts/Attachments:
text/plain (9 lines)
It's a cracker, Arthur. A few nits: L3 doesn't scan. I don't think buy/good-bye is a good rhyme, and arts/out doesn't rhyme. Bill/nail's a bit dodgy too, though maybe OK as a slant. I'm not sure deigned is the ideal word. Best regards, David
Top of Message | Previous Page | Permalink
Advanced Options
For help and support help@jisc.ac.uk