Thank you for your suggestions. I use visual punctuation which is with white
space; I shall look at poem's lines and see if I want any white space for
pause.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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<< Dear Ryfkah,
I had the same problem as others with the first line, but I'm also a little
puzzled by the phrase 'the woman's husband'. The woman has already been
implied in 'her bed', so I wondered why not simply 'her husband', as it
just seemed a bit awkward to me.
I feel this is a poem that cries out for punctuation:
Spread plum, the passion-flower
is how I would present the first line, for instance,but you may have some
particular reason for omitting punctuation.
Kind regards,
grasshopper >>
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