Thanks for the suggestion - something to seriously think about.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 7/6/02 4:07:47 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
This is fine. One little suggestion though. To help your architecture of
text, a phrase I've recently learnt, perhaps the line "Morning finds closed
petals" could be a single line stanza that would balance with the last line
of the poem.
bw
James >>
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