Hi Grassy,
I stumbled at the rhythmic change (I think) in lines 9/10. I think it might
have been the multiple syllables that tripped me. (I know 'memories' is a
poly-sib, but I didn't trip there, so it doesn't count.
Cheers,
Frank
> Tantivvy
>
>Hark, tantivvy on the breeze
>stirs our ancient memories;
>The baying of a pack of hounds,
>one of earth's most glorious sounds.
>I see pink men in full brave cry
>and know the fox must love to die.
>Let 's raise the ruby stirrup cup
>and toast to Reynard's ripping-up.
>No more honorable employment
>than to kill with sweet enjoyment.
>Hark, tantivvy on the breeze:
>Heaven is made of such as these.
>
> grasshopper
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